My tweet from 2/5 to 2/9

This is my tweet in English from 2/5 to 2/9.
It's spoken English.

2/5
I'll go to GOUTOKUJI which is famous for "MANEKINEKO" on this weekend.Because my colleague from KR wants to buy "MANEKINEKO" as a souvenir.
→
I'll go to GOUTOKUJI which is famous for "MANEKINEKO" this weekend because my colleague from KR wants to buy one as a souvenir.

2/6
So cold that I can't move as I want to move…
→Clearer
So cold that I can't move how I want to move…

2/8
Though I went to take copies, I brought a new cup of coffee...
→Clearer
Though I went to take copies, I forgot and I brought a new cup of coffee instead...

I'm waiting the base data to investigate...
→Crrect & Clearer
I'm waiting for the base data so I can't investigate it...
Or
I'm waiting for the base data until I can investigate it...


This is a coooooool web site & suitable for BGM while working.Go to→ http://bit.ly/b4V0co
→That's fine. But this is more natural.
This is a coooooool web site & great for BGM while working. Go to→ http://bit.ly/b4V0co

no no,I just made a boo-boo at office(´｀)
→Fine

2/8
Are you suffering from hay fever?（I'm not.）If so,it's sad you can't enjoy Spring atmosphere…
→Crrect & Clearer
Are you suffering from allergies?（I'm not.） If so, it's sad you can't enjoy the spring atmosphere…


1:Natives never abbreviate a space after a comma or period.
2:Natives write sentences clear.

Let's tweet in English!

I think tweeting in English is very nice to have a habit of thinking in English.
Because you can do it whenever & wherever you want.
In a commuter train, while walking, at lunch time, even at toilet!
If you want to learn English & make your English conversation smoother,
Why don't you start Twitter?

I tweet almost everyday & started to have my tweet corrected by a native speaker.
There're many things I don't know & It's very helpful.

I share all my findings here from now on.
I'm glad if you find new things here^^

P.S. Will you please point out any mistakes to me in this post.